Do passwords get offended when they are forgotten?

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John G
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Sat Sep 11, 2010 5:26 pm

The safeguard was spurned,
not intentionally,
of course.

Just a lack of memory.
After one look at this planet any visitor from outer space would say 'I want to see the manager.
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Sat Sep 11, 2010 6:32 pm

An amusing little nugget, John. I like the play on human/computer memory.

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Mon Sep 13, 2010 6:37 am

Nice and tight.

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Mon Sep 13, 2010 11:12 am

John,
This is such a great title that if you don't actually need a poem to go with it! :)
Or you could have
Do passwords get offended <--- title
when they are forgotten? <--- poem

Nice one
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Tue Sep 14, 2010 9:31 am

Enjoyed it as is, but cannot help myself from making a Senryu out of it! Smiles.

safeguard spurned
unintentionally
a lack of memory

Thanks for sharing.
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Tue Sep 14, 2010 9:22 pm

twoleftfeet wrote:Do passwords get offended <--- title
when they are forgotten? <--- poem

Nice one
Geoff
Nice one yourself, Geoff. Very good.
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Wed Sep 22, 2010 11:28 pm

I agree with Geoffs comment, such a great heading.

Nice one and certainly short and sweet

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Mon Oct 04, 2010 11:58 pm

agree with twoleftfeet.

fun poem, enjoyed!
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