Featured poem - Beginners - Jan 2011

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Sun Feb 06, 2011 7:54 pm

I've been given plenipotentiary powers for this month, so I have chosen my favourite poems from Beginners, and there was much to like - not just the ones I have listed below, but I had to draw an arbitrary line somewhere. So ...

I like Suzanne's Carnival Triolet because it's a bright, cheerful, pulsating thing, like a Catherine Wheel.

I like Nicky B's Your turn because it takes a clever idea and doesn't overdo it.

I like R P Jackson's en attendant because it's so clever, and so gleefully pleased with itself for being so clever, although I'm not sure it should really be in Beginners at all.

I like the whole series of poems for his dad by oggiesnr, although I think October 25th is my favourite.

But for my feature I'm going to choose Carnival Triolet by Suzanne.
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Sun Feb 06, 2011 8:25 pm

Wow. My husband just laughed, I have said Wow about 25 times. Thank you, David. Wow. It is very encouraging. Wow. Thank you.

Well done everyone! Nice to see such life blooming.

Warmly,
Suzanne
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Sun Feb 06, 2011 8:28 pm

Very well done all, especially Suzanne!

I completely missed your triolet on the boards, perfect combination of form and content, it works really well.
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Wed Feb 09, 2011 10:19 am

Congratulation Suzanne for a delightful Triolet. And to R P Jackson, Nicky B and Steve for catchy pieces.
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Wed Feb 09, 2011 11:18 am

Nice one, Suz.

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Sat Feb 12, 2011 8:53 pm

Hey well done Suz.
Much deserved. :D
Pat on the back for the runners up.
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Thu Feb 17, 2011 1:23 pm

Thank you everyone for the nice comments. It is encouraging.
Warmly,
Suzanne
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Sat Feb 19, 2011 11:36 pm

Well done Suzanne. Very well deserved. :wink:
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