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Fraser Fir
Posted: Tue Dec 24, 2013 1:13 pm
by Jackie
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This fir touched the ceiling
when she came in bound,
but unleashed she stayed wound,
refusing to be strung,
faithful to the snow
on the hill.
We teased her with bulbs
and told stories
till at last our wanting
released her full glory.
Re: Fraser Fir
Posted: Tue Dec 24, 2013 5:17 pm
by Antcliff
I liked that!
Happy Xmas, Jackie
Seth
Re: Fraser Fir
Posted: Tue Dec 24, 2013 6:09 pm
by Jackie
You, too, Seth, to you and yours.
Jackie
Re: Fraser Fir
Posted: Thu Dec 26, 2013 1:35 pm
by David
Our Christmas tree is looming approvingly over my shoulder as I read your poem, Jackie. Happy Christmas!
Cheers
David
Re: Fraser Fir
Posted: Thu Dec 26, 2013 7:59 pm
by Jackie
So happy she approves! I wish you the same.
Jackie
Re: Fraser Fir
Posted: Fri Dec 27, 2013 3:38 am
by Sharon
I like the idea of the fir staying faithful to the snow on the hill...
Enjoyed
Re: Fraser Fir
Posted: Tue Jan 21, 2014 11:48 pm
by floyd
Sets a lovely mood. I like how the few rhymes accentuate the piece, and it wraps up nicely
Re: Fraser Fir
Posted: Wed Jan 22, 2014 12:34 am
by Jackie
Thank you, Floyd. Nice to see you here!
Jackie