In the long grass,
is it one
or two crickets
I hear?
Listening
Glad you both like it.
Nar, I understand why you suggest inserting 'only' at that point, but think it would push the reader a little much in one direction. It's a very nice suggestion though.
Many thanks for reading and commenting.
All my best,
Firebird
Nar, I understand why you suggest inserting 'only' at that point, but think it would push the reader a little much in one direction. It's a very nice suggestion though.
Many thanks for reading and commenting.
All my best,
Firebird
-
Ros
- Moderator
- Posts: 7963
- Joined: Sun Dec 07, 2008 4:53 pm
- antispam: no
- Location: this hill-shadowed city/of razors and knives.
- Contact:
enjoyed - captures the moment well.
Ros
Ros
Rosencrantz: What are you playing at? Guildenstern: Words. Words. They're all we have to go on.
___________________________
Antiphon - www.antiphon.org.uk
___________________________
Antiphon - www.antiphon.org.uk
