Newtonian cider

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nar
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Sat May 23, 2015 7:52 pm

fermented apples
fall far from the tree, Isaac
final gravity…

- nar
War does not determine who is right - only who is left. (Bertrand Russell)
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Macavity
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Tue May 26, 2015 6:05 pm

Neat one nar...once I looked up the meaning of final gravity! :D

all the best

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Tue May 26, 2015 6:09 pm

Macavity wrote:Neat one nar...once I looked up the meaning of final gravity! :D

all the best

mac

Ha! Yes, looking up "final gravity" helped. :D
We fray into the future, rarely wrought
Save in the tapestries of afterthought.
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David
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Tue May 26, 2015 6:39 pm

It is neat (excellent pun by Mac), Neil, but I'm sure there must be an extra Newtonian dimension to this that I'm not getting. Still (me now!), it went down a treat all the same.

Cheers

David
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