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Snow White
Posted: Fri Jun 19, 2015 9:58 pm
by nar
half empty half fool
she consumed silver linings
from magic mirrors
Re: Snow White
Posted: Sat Jun 20, 2015 1:01 pm
by Moth
Hi nar,
Not sure I entirely get the significance of consumed silver linings - I'm thinking this relates to SW finding her prince which then turns the piece on its head from what I thought it to be about, i.e. the foolishness of vanity and the superficial, though the title doesn't suggest this either. Not so Snow White might - more of a sneering comment about empty-headed fools being rewarded. I found the opening line inspired, and the final one good, so think something more is needed in between.
Re: Snow White
Posted: Sat Jun 20, 2015 7:15 pm
by David
Gnomic, Neil. It's an attractive read, but I'm still trying to untangle the complexities. Which is pretty good going for three lines.
Cheers
David
Re: Snow White
Posted: Sat Jun 20, 2015 10:05 pm
by nar
Hey, Moth.
Thanks for that. Useful to know where I've missed.
S'bout an addict.
Cheers...
Re: Snow White
Posted: Sun Jun 21, 2015 11:16 am
by nar
Thanks, David.
You know what I'm like, trying to cram a lot into a few, as ever.
Cheers...
Re: Snow White
Posted: Mon Jun 22, 2015 2:35 pm
by cynwulf
G'day Nar,
Ah! that explains it, not so gnomic after all. I must learn to think more laterally, like our lepidopteran friend I took the title too literally. Packs a lot in a small space.
Best, c.
Re: Snow White
Posted: Wed Jul 08, 2015 8:06 am
by Suzanne
Ahhhhh slip "line" in there somewhere.
Nice to see you nar.
X
Suzanne
Re: Snow White
Posted: Thu Jul 09, 2015 6:59 pm
by David
nar wrote:S'bout an addict.
I am so thick!
It's very good.