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New to poetry? Unsure about the quality of your work? Then why not post here to receive some gentle feedback.
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Halfwrittenpoem
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Tue Apr 11, 2017 6:39 am

Just for tonight
no strings attached
it felt right
I felt wrong
necessary evil
tales it's place.
Lou
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Tue Apr 11, 2017 11:40 am

Not quite sure what this ones' about but two typos jump out in the last line: I think you mean 'takes' and you don't need the apostrophe in 'its'.

Best,
Lou
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