Hi FLiss,
I rather like "rounded." Flaxen I'm unsure about - were you troubled that long was followed by showing it was long? And I don't see your new title, but then I am new to all this!
Cheers,
John
He dreams of castles (rev. 2)
Hi John,
Thank you! Yes, I thought the tell-then-show might be a bit much. I'm still thinking about alternatives here.
The new title is displayed as the thread title: 'He dreams of castles'
Bw,
Fliss