boris the clown

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tonty3324
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Sun Jul 17, 2022 7:27 pm

Hi,

another boris poem. warning this has some mild language in it

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Sun Jul 17, 2022 8:32 pm

Hi Ton,
Please be aware of forum rules when posting, including:
1. Review at least 2 other poems before submitting your own. You don't have to be a university poetry professor to do this. Simply read the poem in question a couple of times - inwardly digest it - and then try and identify what you like or dislike about it, preferably giving examples.
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Phil
tonty3324
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Mon Jul 18, 2022 7:20 am

apologies Phil , i will make sure it is done..
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Mon Jul 18, 2022 7:39 am

Cheers Ton.

I agree there is that irony in democracy where rulers dictate to the electorate rather than serve. They call it leadership🤣 And, of course, there is the hypocrisy of say/do.

I should mention there is a welcome/introduction page if you want to give some background to yourself or/and your writing.

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Best

Phil
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Mon Jul 18, 2022 10:11 am

thanks.

I'll have a look at that.
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