They Have Fish That Live in Trees
and not just any kind of fish; these are beautiful fish,
fish you will remember. every day,
you learn something new about the world.
this has been going on since childhood.
now the arctic ice is melting,
the shipping lanes are opening in the north.
birds are swimming north in the sky’s vast ocean –
you will never see these birds again.
They Have Fish That Live in Trees
Hi Phil,
Yup, this one feels sad to me too. This is indeed a marine sequence in the MS. The title is a throwaway line from this movie: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Thin_ ... 1998_film)
Cheers,
John
Yup, this one feels sad to me too. This is indeed a marine sequence in the MS. The title is a throwaway line from this movie: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Thin_ ... 1998_film)
Cheers,
John
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Interesting poem, Tony. It is engaging, if a little enigmatic. I like the flow of the language. I'll keep reading it until the light bulb in my head goes off.
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Why did I think that this was Tony's poem? So sorry, John.
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