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conspiratorial

Posted: Sun Aug 20, 2023 12:42 am
by ton321
Maybe my riches will come after my death,

the owned money of happiness, given and taken

like wages; the conspiratorial echoes of an earlier time

would alleviate the poverty of the promises that were broken.

Re: Conspiritorial

Posted: Sun Aug 20, 2023 12:48 am
by jisbell00
Nice last line and I like the half-rhyme. You have a typo in your title, i think!

Cheers,
John

Re: conspiratorial

Posted: Sun Aug 20, 2023 12:51 am
by ton321
Thanks John

cut/ paste doesn't always cut it

But we're never gonna survive, unless
We get a little crazy

Seal

T

Re: conspiratorial

Posted: Sun Aug 20, 2023 2:53 am
by jisbell00
I believe I've heard that song. It's a good message. :)

Cheers,
John