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The Wild Life
Posted: Thu Jul 20, 2006 10:17 am
by Minnie
The eloquent elephant said to the rabbit,
'do you smoke for pleasure, or just out of habit?'
The rabbit replied, with upmost composure,
'peer pressure mainly through social exposure.'
Posted: Thu Jul 20, 2006 2:58 pm
by twoleftfeet
Upmost or utmost?
Posted: Thu Jul 20, 2006 3:44 pm
by k-j
Ha ha. Sweet. I like it. Try "responded" instead of "replied" for a better scan. And "utmost".
Posted: Thu Jul 20, 2006 3:52 pm
by Jester
Hi Minnie. Like ditties like this. As Geoff has indicated, I think it should be "utmost", and k-j's suggestion makes sense too (could even use "the rabbit replied with the utmost composure").
Super.
Mick.
Posted: Mon Jul 24, 2006 7:10 pm
by Shepherdess
Hi
this is Great it made me giggle and a good giggle is whet we all need
thank you
Posted: Thu Jul 27, 2006 4:06 pm
by benjywenjy
hahaha witty and lighthearted. Pefrect for hot weather like today
benjy
Posted: Thu Jul 27, 2006 11:26 pm
by camus
ha ha,
nice little ditty.
Posted: Wed Aug 02, 2006 12:37 am
by me
Well done. I can pucture an elephant in a top hat and tails speaking with a rabbit at cocktail party. I agree that it is great for a giggle. Do you mind me asking the inspiation for this 'ditty'?
Posted: Thu Aug 03, 2006 9:56 am
by thoke
I don't like this. Nyah! It's not bad though.