Tonight

[Macavity]

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[David]

I like this. Nicely menacing, especially gathering for feasting they see him smile / curling asleep in his teddy bear dreams.

But aren't spiders our friends?

[Robert]

My style Mac. I really like descriptive narrative. I understood it on the first read which means 10/10.

It could be read aloud in one of those gravelly type voices for a horror film trailer.

You are right David. I like spiders and can't tolerate the cretins that stamp on them.

Nice piece for Halloween.

[Macavity]

Thanks guys. I, of course, treat spiders with the respect they deserve.

mac

[barrie]

'Thanks guys. I, of course, treat spiders with the respect they deserve.' -
And I should think so too.

This is a poem to read to kids, comfortably threatening, but not enough to cause arachnophobia - Could be a problem for those who already have it though - Best to read it in the dark.

nice one

Barrie

[Macavity]

Best to read it in the dark

Thanks barrie

mac

[Robert]

Best read in the dark with glo-worms to add to the fear!

[Macavity]

Worms always remind me of graves, how about slugs?

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[Yesterday]

i liked the poem, found it soothingly threatening. i keep coming back to it and i have to reread it. that means it pretty good in my humble opinion.

[quote]weaving silken pillows [/quote]


[quote]curling asleep in his teddy bear dreams.[/quote]

these were probably my faviorte lines.

i looked up that sight... wierd, interesting, its bugs, it would probably interst my brother