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HeidiHogrefe
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Mon Feb 05, 2007 5:18 pm

disregard this...sorry
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Tue Feb 06, 2007 12:18 am

Disregard this... sorry
silent words had
tantalized
and undefined
they withered
a gentle corpse
of hope.


sorry, know the feeling, i presume u started to write and changed you mind... a lot...
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