I'm glad you've lived too (Working title)
Posted: Mon Apr 28, 2008 7:59 pm
I just got off the train and have written this ditty. I have hardly edited it from its conception, thought I'd juts stick it up and see what everyone thinks, it still needs a lot of work but...
Her face is concealed
with the varnish
of fools.
Her mind;
In an ocular courtship.
Her body;
In silent waltz
with the world.
Every curve of her figure
lies lavishly adorned
with the garments
of Narcissus.
Her person reduced
to a wavering smile.
She wallows
in her remains,
she beams,
I loath her.
Her face is concealed
with the varnish
of fools.
Her mind;
In an ocular courtship.
Her body;
In silent waltz
with the world.
Every curve of her figure
lies lavishly adorned
with the garments
of Narcissus.
Her person reduced
to a wavering smile.
She wallows
in her remains,
she beams,
I loath her.