Pinter

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John G
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Sat Dec 27, 2008 10:56 am

So farewell
Harold Pinter.
Who left
us with
plays and
the word
Pinteresque,
which can
be defined
by long


















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After one look at this planet any visitor from outer space would say 'I want to see the manager.
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Sat Dec 27, 2008 11:35 am

An ace John - nothing more to say

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Sat Dec 27, 2008 4:05 pm

Nice bit of silence just before the end - You've beaten EJ Thribb to this one.

I like it

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After letting go of branches and walking through the ape gait, we managed to grasp what hands were really for......
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Sat Dec 27, 2008 5:40 pm

I think Mr Thribb (17 3/4) could be one of my greates influences.
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