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Leigh
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Sun Jan 18, 2009 11:36 am

No romantic moment to lay dying, no poigniant last lament

It's just a car to crush you, and I wouldn't even know
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Sun Jan 18, 2009 1:32 pm

Hi Leigh

I liked this as I thought it flowed well. However the flow seemed to stop with the last words. I thought something like "you didn't even know" flowed better but maybe the idea was to stop the flow??
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Sun Jan 18, 2009 5:16 pm

Hi Leigh.
This was thought provoking. It has a lot of emotion in it, such resignation.
and it is a bit scary, like life is.
Suzanne
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