Warmer rains

nar · Mon Mar 16, 2009 1:26 pm

Pre-Easter downpours
rein-in February's frost --
lawnmowers awaken.

Mon Mar 16, 2009 7:21 pm

This is just you rewriting your hibernating gritters, isn't it? You don't get away with it that easily, you know.

Cheers

David

nar · Mon Mar 16, 2009 7:25 pm

Mon Mar 16, 2009 7:28 pm

Nothing wrong with revisiting past glories, and hibernating gritters is a lovely line. Still has me chuckling.

Cheers

David

nar · Mon Mar 16, 2009 7:52 pm

Hehe. Agreed. This was just a quick one. Need to start work on something more substantial soon.

- Neil

Lovely · Mon Mar 16, 2009 10:07 pm

arunansu · Thu Mar 19, 2009 7:37 am

Great imagery! Loved the last line. Enjoyed.

jazziwoz · Sun Mar 29, 2009 6:08 pm

I enjoyed the imagery of this

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