Brave tree

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stevj016
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Thu Apr 02, 2009 8:38 pm

Hello everyone,

This ones called 'brave tree'

Tucked away with pride and honour,
So much wisdom, so many years.
Coping with the rage of nature,
Never shedding any tears.

During storms and ice cold days,
You keep your spine staying strong.
Communicating how you do,
On the wind you sing your song.

The beauty is yours and only yours,
The birds fly to you, a trip worthwhile.
When you send out your voice,
You make the desert smile.

Out in the mystic countryside,
Where the fairies and unicorns play.
You protect them in their regal kingdom,
Sending badness on its way.

The creatures live with piece of mind,
The fairies happily roam.
Because of your kindness old oak,
These wondrous creatures have a home.

When there’s rain you give them shelter,
When it’s cold you keep them warm.
Not only do you ride the weather,
When its here you are the storm.

You are the king of both worlds,
Of Mother Nature and the mystic realm.
You are honoured and respected,
Of the cosmos you are the helm.

You give the fairies their safe glen,
I place they can be happy and free.
You should be so proud old oak,
You are a very brave tree.

Thanks,
Stevj016.
Lovely
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Perspicacious Poster
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Fri Apr 03, 2009 2:24 am

A beaut. Love you loads. Me thought I could do tricks sometimes but you're clever.


I want to hug you-------- please!

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dabeldarks
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Fri Apr 03, 2009 10:10 pm

wow that was so good, i like this.... when i read some of the poems on here i feel like my poems are very limited, but i guess i will learn as i go along by reading poems like yours...
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jazziwoz
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Sat Apr 04, 2009 7:51 pm

Lovely piece well presented - lots of imagination mixed with reality well done!
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