Edit:
moonlight
pours over barrel cactus
beside windowsill :
I ride down the waves
on a surfboard
in California waters
Original :
moonlight
pours over barrel cactus
beside windowsill :
silvery rectangles
on floorboard
I ride down the waves
on a surfboard
in California waters
Saxophone wails
Last edited by arunansu on Sat Apr 04, 2009 10:28 am, edited 1 time in total.
Thanks Jasper and Jazziwoz for your thoughts on this.
Thanks.
Thanks.