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end waste.
Posted: Sun May 03, 2009 11:54 am
by Leigh
Either you have someone else, you think I need discipline like an unruly dog or you are just being a bitch.
I believe you are trying to force me out of love with you. everything is a construct
Re: end waste.
Posted: Sun May 03, 2009 12:58 pm
by David
Well, it is what it is, I suppose, but is it a poem?
Re: end waste.
Posted: Sun May 03, 2009 1:45 pm
by Leigh
maybe its part of a poem. I think its easy to imagine the rest.
Re: end waste.
Posted: Sun May 03, 2009 3:25 pm
by kattie
I understand your topic but I think it lacks the structure of a poem.
Re: end waste.
Posted: Sun May 03, 2009 4:38 pm
by Lovely
I think David is right. Is it a poem?
Best Wishes.
DJL
Re: end waste.
Posted: Mon May 04, 2009 5:29 am
by arunansu
I do feel this IS a poem, Leigh. A prose poem. And a good one.Smiles.
Re: end waste.
Posted: Mon May 04, 2009 7:42 am
by ray miller
I think it's the bones of a poem howling at the finger that is pointing at the moon.
Re: end waste.
Posted: Mon May 04, 2009 9:07 pm
by Suzanne
I enjoy your contributions to the site. They are fresh and cause a bit of pondering. I liked it.
You are very much alive, Leigh, it shows in your writing.
thanks,
Suzanne