BRAIN

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LAND_OF_BREAD
Posts: 10
Joined: Thu Feb 17, 2005 3:42 pm
Location: Barnsley, South Yorkshire, UK

Thu Feb 17, 2005 7:01 pm

Deep dark filthy twisted

foul disgusting minds blistered

brewing stewing in own self pity

hidden while hiding truth so gritty

bent distorted ravaged with thought

stinking smelling of sins bought

squashed rotten incapable of feeling

putrid sickening no signs of healing

messy dizzy searching for clarity

creeping hatred slid into infinity

dormant deep abusive emotion

ripping slashing child like commotion

poking probing cloudy intellect

misty murky unforgivable self neglect

riveting niggling flinching in uneasy pain

disturbing thing this Human brain.
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