Noiseless, little spider about my thoughts

[Ewan_McTeagle]

Noiseless, little spider stood right there
where I’d like to go. Where I’m busy, crazy
or just plain happy and next to everything.
You must consider that I won’t speak for months.
Maybe because I’m reading old letters,
facing the mirror contemplating thoughts
that do not concern you my dear. I’m having a good,
bad dream and a phase that goes through it all.
Or I’m content like a pack full of cigarettes.
Again and again however will I go.
What is so special about those cellar door?
Nevertheless your pretty blue eyes have to wait 3
maybe 4 days before I get up and decide either way.
Because it’s so damn frustrating to be right
and not being able to simply go nuts.

[camus]

Ewan,

Your poems are never less than interesting, often intriguing. Have you been reading Walt Whitman?

"and next to everything." could mean so much?

"Or I’m content like a pack full of cigarettes." here are you personifying the cigarrettes ?

Unfortunately its very difficult to string the obscurites together, it seems like fragments from many poems!

Still, some exciting language used.

cheers
Kris

[Ewan_McTeagle]

Yes I've been reading Walt Whitman for a long time.
I know it might be chaotic but I wanted to get opinions in order to improve.

Thank you very much Camus.