Now take my hand
down by the sand
we'll build a mountain to scale
if you should call
i'll break your fall
you my friend will never fail
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Sorry Bonza old chap, but this doesn't really do anything for me. The rhymes are rather predictable, the subject matter uninspiring and, to cap it all, the last line sounds incredibly forced.
Cheers
Cam
PS you'd probably be better off posting this in "beginners".
Cheers
Cam
PS you'd probably be better off posting this in "beginners".