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Rosencrantz: What are you playing at? Guildenstern: Words. Words. They're all we have to go on.
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Brilliant!
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Feature
fine words butter no parsnips
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Yes, very good!
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feature!
We fray into the future, rarely wrought
Save in the tapestries of afterthought.
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Wed Dec 31, 2014 5:07 pm

Well, it's not as if I actually wrote it. But googlebot is an official member of the site...
Rosencrantz: What are you playing at? Guildenstern: Words. Words. They're all we have to go on.
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Wed Dec 31, 2014 5:28 pm

A feature, and a series...!
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Wed Dec 31, 2014 5:44 pm

There's a twitter account that tweets them. But this (accidental) one is better than most I've seen.

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Thu Jan 01, 2015 7:35 pm

Lovely found poem!

Mine came up with slightly different results....


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But let it be known that I am hereby resolved to try to try not to. :)

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Good one, Jane!
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I love what is says about humanity,
beautiful and genius.
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Sun Jan 04, 2015 12:42 pm

You know me, Ros - I'm not one to follow the crowd. But sometimes you just have to.

Like now. And I agree. Brilliant!

The text of the 'poem' itself is almost beside the point. It's the idea that makes it. And that's creative, amusing and - in its own way - meaningful. Poetry, in fact.

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Thu Jan 15, 2015 12:09 pm

Brilliant, very smart! Not what I expected when I read the title :)
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Sat Jan 17, 2015 6:09 pm

I will make this post a sticky - if anyone else finds google being inspiring, stick them on the bottom here...

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That latest one is like a survivalist version of Little House on the Prairie. But maybe that always was survivalist anyway.
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Aren't stickies supposed to stick? At the top? Just a thought.
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Darn glue.
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Well, make up your mind. Can probably manage the hippopota.

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I think it heard you!
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Wed Jan 28, 2015 6:27 pm

Fun stuff, Ros. This might be classed as computer-written poetry.

All the best

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Are there any rules about cheating?

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