Waynesday

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twoleftfeet
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Thu Jun 08, 2006 9:34 am

"The Sun is God", cried
Turner as he lay dying
but the Mirror said

"Wayne Rooney is God
and let Wednesday be Wayne's day
(as long as he plays)"

Make him your idol -
Put him on a pedestal -
(Kick the chair away)

What does it profit
a man to lose the World Cup
but gain his (metatar)soul?
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Thu Jun 08, 2006 1:13 pm

*giggle*

like the ending especially :) very humourous thorughout

its great to see the public interested in important things rather than boring stuff such as politics and the like :P

England for the World cup, come on lads!

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Thu Jun 08, 2006 2:27 pm

*giggle* indeed.

(Kick the chair away) they certainly will, if he plays and doesn't perform. Funny the excuses they've been coming up with since 1966.

(metatar)soul?

LOL, that was almost painful.
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Thu Jun 08, 2006 3:55 pm

Thanks Benjy and Kris.
Here we go again - I can't remember who said it, but
"The triumph of hope over experiece"

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Thu Jun 08, 2006 6:00 pm

Nice one again Geoff.
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