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ton321
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Sat Feb 03, 2024 3:37 am

I find myself eating Frankfurter sausages in brioche buns,
Last edited by ton321 on Sun Feb 04, 2024 2:15 am, edited 1 time in total.
Counting the beats,
Counting the slow heart beats,
The bleeding to death of time in slow heart beats,
Wakeful they lie.

Robert Graves
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Macavity
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Sat Feb 03, 2024 5:53 am

:lol: that was a tough read (I've been veggie for a year). The meaty bits were very meaty!
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Sat Feb 03, 2024 7:28 am

Yes indeed, lots of meat in here!

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ton321
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Sun Feb 04, 2024 2:19 am

sorry guys Ive become a Vegie



Tony
Counting the beats,
Counting the slow heart beats,
The bleeding to death of time in slow heart beats,
Wakeful they lie.

Robert Graves
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