Ode to Emily

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Fri Aug 02, 2024 9:35 pm

. -- .. .-.. -.-- / -.. .. -.-. -.- .. -. ... --- -. /
.-- .- ... / .... . .-. . .-.-.- .-.-.- .-.-.-

https://morsecode.world/international/translator.html
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Sat Aug 03, 2024 2:30 am

My fave poet.

She invented a new punctuation. Dots and dashes.
Where you have to connect the dots.....

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Counting the beats,
Counting the slow heart beats,
The bleeding to death of time in slow heart beats,
Wakeful they lie.

Robert Graves
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Sat Aug 10, 2024 12:00 am

Indeed, well deciphered.
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Sat Sep 14, 2024 5:26 am

That's a cool idea! I appreciate the translation as well.
"Connecting the dots" is such a cool take on morse code.
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Fri Sep 27, 2024 9:55 pm

That's a cool idea!
I thought so! I think the idea far superior to the poem, but sometimes that's how it is.

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