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Tue Apr 05, 2005 1:11 am

should it ever come to pass
that her hand becomes free at last
then be sure she knows my reasons
for living through the past

'cause should i ever hold her hand
the pressure i could not withstand
so quietly here i shall remain
i'll love her in my daydream land


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Tue Apr 05, 2005 1:13 am

awe...
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