NEW POEM: HELP ME

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bonza
Posts: 15
Joined: Sat Sep 25, 2004 5:06 pm

Tue Oct 12, 2004 5:27 pm

HELP ME

sit in silence
your head is in pieces
wanting to know
whats round the corner
starting to shiver
you fear the worse
no one to turn to
hands glued to your head
so you cant see
whats really going on
in front of your eyes
help me escape
throw me the rope
you'll do anything
for another chance


Please note: i'm not going crazy just in case you got that impression, im just trying to be a bit abstract . many thanks
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