From My Office Window, Ealing, Middlesex - 17th May 05.

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Greenman
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Tue May 17, 2005 8:15 pm

Dancing amid a million ebbing points
of light.
The day drifts across the eventide,
In slow fluid motion.
Setting ablaze the sky,
With the unseen hands of May.

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Tue May 17, 2005 11:12 pm

wow! you live bloody near me...

nice short poem too, especially

'In slow fluid motion '
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Wed May 18, 2005 2:14 pm

GREENMAN

A nice snapshot of late Spring into early Summer

I liked the use of the word 'eventide'.

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Wed May 18, 2005 2:34 pm

'The unseen hands of May' is a cracking (non-)image.

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Wed May 18, 2005 10:01 pm

(non-)image?
"Don't treat your common sense like an umbrella. When you come into a room to philosophize, don't leave it outside, but bring it in with you." Wittgenstein
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