Is everyone right with the things that they say?
Should I keep you at length? Should I push you away?
Are you really my friend? or a foe in disguise
When you promised me truth all you gave me was lies,
When you smiled to my face, put the knife in my back,
Let me down once again with a silent attack,
With your "no Im your friend, I'll be there, its ok"
And I trust you again, but again I must pay,
well Im tired of the lies, all the pain and the scars,
yes this time my friend you have pushed me too far
So the next time you need me, you look to your back
Im not there, I dont care, you can face the attack,
On your own, all alone, cut the meat to the bone.
As your loyalty wanes once again your a clown,
When I need you, the truth is you just let me down.
Friend?
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mybelovedANAmosity
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- Joined: Sat Nov 13, 2004 4:58 am
Wow, I'm surprised this hasn't received any reviews yet! It was very good. I really like the way you keep with your rhyming scheme, it makes it very enjoyable to read! Keep up the good work!