Bare bent bodies strewn
as memories; broken, spread-
eagle bindings all
across my floor—those glossy
girls, molded at the corners:
eternally on my mind.
Old issues (Tanka)
- dillingworth
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another great poem. i love the double meanings: "spread-eagle bindings", "glossy", "moulded at the corners". sordid, slightly disgusting, powerful and concise.
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ditto
sort of
I missed the disgusting part
sort of
I missed the disgusting part