Re-align (a song that started as a poem)

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seeksthebalance
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Thu Sep 08, 2005 12:50 pm

I don't know how this one will read to you guys... I can hear the music that it goes with so I get a fuller effect. Hope you like it, for it's message if not for my lack of craft. Seeks.

This love I give away, expecting no return,
'cause no one should believe you die when you've been burned.
Your answers are all questions, only you could find,
so cleanse your misconceptions and you will free your mind.

There's no reflection in your eyes
you've lost connection with your life,
and Heaven knows from time to time
we all need to redefine,
and to re-align,
re-align our minds.

This love I feel is growing and I cannot hide,
the power of compassion that's burning bright inside.
Forgetting all those questions that only you have found,
just lose yourself within in me lets run for higher ground.
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