Ode to Subjectivity

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william
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Tue Sep 20, 2005 6:37 pm

I have been published
thr’wing my words on the page,
writing anything my heart wished
in any order to arr’nge
O lovinge words! Singe with me!
with glee.

I justis and truthe love
just cannot think of what I could write of
to express my inner thought.
Instead I just jot.

dont say to me that I suck.
good poetry comes by luck -
"what’ver floateth thee boat,"
I say, and gets your goat



Copyright William 2005
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Tue Sep 20, 2005 6:42 pm

Please tell me the spelling errors were intentional...
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Tue Sep 20, 2005 6:46 pm

Ha ha. I like it. As the sage saith, it is not for me but it is for many.

Nice backhoe, by the way.
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Tue Sep 20, 2005 6:49 pm

:lol: yes fear not Keith. My inspiration was poetry.com, but, I couldn't resist. I added the copyright after seeing people do it here and slapped it up.

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Tue Sep 20, 2005 6:56 pm

akay. then I like it.

Yeh,

I'm growing more comfortable with the copyright thing. Actually, tolerant would probably be the better word.

Cheers,

Keith
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