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POLYLOGICK
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Hi PL,
Welcome to the forum.
I'm afraid that I find this rather abstract and old fashioned. I'd rather that you found a way of showing me the story rather than telling me the story. Alternatively, paint me a picture.
Check out Eliot's theory of the 'objective correlative'.
Cheers
Cam
PS too much Ozzy Osborne can damage your health!
Welcome to the forum.
I'm afraid that I find this rather abstract and old fashioned. I'd rather that you found a way of showing me the story rather than telling me the story. Alternatively, paint me a picture.
Check out Eliot's theory of the 'objective correlative'.
Cheers
Cam
PS too much Ozzy Osborne can damage your health!