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Why, hello there!
I quite enjoyed this poem. One of things I liked, was how some lines painted a very specific picture (no pun intended) of what was happening. And other lines, were sort of up for interpretation, not specific at all. I enjoyed the contrast between those, whether it was intentional or not.
For some reason, I also fancy poems that paint an actualy picture in the writing.
Good job!
I quite enjoyed this poem. One of things I liked, was how some lines painted a very specific picture (no pun intended) of what was happening. And other lines, were sort of up for interpretation, not specific at all. I enjoyed the contrast between those, whether it was intentional or not.
For some reason, I also fancy poems that paint an actualy picture in the writing.
Good job!
Hi Kaba,
Welcome to the forum , thanks for the feedback
Viusal Artists fascinate me with their processes and idiosyncracies , which I believe are akin to crafting poetry - I should know I have one in the family - LOL
cheers
Arco
Welcome to the forum , thanks for the feedback
Viusal Artists fascinate me with their processes and idiosyncracies , which I believe are akin to crafting poetry - I should know I have one in the family - LOL
cheers
Arco
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Robert Davidson
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You have painted a good picture here - realistic in its rich descriptions and
surrealistic in its blurred boundaries. I could visualise it all.
Robert Davidson.
surrealistic in its blurred boundaries. I could visualise it all.
Robert Davidson.