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Delboy
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Joined: Wed Jan 05, 2005 8:44 am
Location: newcastle upon tyne

Wed Jan 05, 2005 8:48 am

I once saw a vision...
A vision of a man, standing upon a grassy hiltop,
Unaware of the torture and hatered, so apparant, that took place all around him,
Unaware of the treatment and condition of his fellow Man.. Woman.. and Child.

I once saw a dream...
A dream of a man, standing upon a grassy hiltop,
Relizing the world he lived in, the horror, the hate, the spite,
Relizing the world of betrayal and greed he has been blessed upon.

I once had a thought...
A thought of a man, standing upon a grassy hiltop,
Wondering what that man thought of my world, this world... our world,
Wondering what pity and sorrow he would bestowe upon me, for i am cursed.

I once did something...
I stood upon a grassy hiltop,
Preached to the nation of unforsaken Men.. Women.. and Children,
Tought them about horror, hate and spite,

and did not bestwoe upon them one ounce, of pity or sorrow,

For that my friend, is how we can redeam, our selves...
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