Totally You

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Delboy
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Wed Jan 05, 2005 8:50 am

As I stand here, holding you here so very tight,
As I laugh heartly, bold and outright,
As I take your hand, so soft, so gentle and so very white,
I become, totaly enthrawled, by You...

As we walk, gingerly, into the light,
As we run, rapidly, into the night,
As we stumble, together, with-out fright,
I feel, totaly absorbed, by you...

As we rise, to an unsteady height,
As we fall, with all gods fury and might,
As we stand tall, facing, the undying fight,
I AM indeed... totaly in love with You...
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Thomas
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Wed Jan 05, 2005 9:16 pm

I like this one puts you there when you read it....
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Imagination is more important than knowledge,knowledge is limited imagination encircles the world.
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