dont get me wrong...

[Stylish Kid in the Riot]

dont get me wrong
as i sing you this song
im so happy its over
i can finally move on
now that its over
i can surely move on
i can finally move on

you'll get me all wrong
as i stumble along
im so happy its over
i can powder my nose
now thats its over
i can powder my nose
i can finally powder my nose

i'll fix what was wrong
by singing this song
im so happy its over
i can burn all your clothes
now that its over
i can burn all your clothes
i can finally burn all your clothes

im always wrong
you say in your songs
im so happy its over
i can sell all your lies
now that its over
i can sell all your lies
i can finally sell all your lies

(go easy... first poem on here...)

[unchained soul]

Hi Stylish,

Its a good subject to write a poem about, however I find the amount of repetition way too much. You are repeating ideas as well as words eg:

I can finally move on
I can sure move on
I can finally move on.

Hope that helps.

Rach