trav n (2): Dublin Airport

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dedalus
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Fri Aug 28, 2009 6:20 pm

Blonde and blowzy, her kids in tow,
she storms up the steps of the airport bus,
and the sparks come leaping from out of her eyes:
Dat feckin awful thick sellin feckin' tickets!
she blazes: and having just seen off my girl to Japan,
here's me slipping down inta Dubbalin.
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Fri Aug 28, 2009 9:11 pm

Very funny poem like it a lot, you got that Dublin way down to a tee .x :wink:
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