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Ros
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Fri Jan 21, 2011 8:47 am

Thanks, Nicky - I'll have to put some work into S1!

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Fri Feb 04, 2011 9:54 pm

Ros

this is so beautiful and amazing!
you have really good word choices here and images are so original and pretty, the whole piece flows so well almost as a song. I have not found anything to dislike.
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Sat Feb 12, 2011 3:09 pm

What would you have to say about that Finnish "poetic language"? Only a dig, I thought the poem was inspired and I have no qualms whatsoever over the elusive Mister what's-his-name. We speak in voices, a multitude of voices, and in the end have to take responsibility for all we do, for better ( :D ) or for poorer ( :? ). And that's the story.

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