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taliesin_the_poet
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Mon Jul 11, 2005 7:06 pm

Come visit me in twilight
When the dawn is yet unbroken,
Let us see again the eve
Of our togetherness.

Remind me of the joys we had -
Enlighten me of joys to come
When I, too, am released
From earthly penance.

Then will I fly in your love's light
And earth's cares I'll no longer grow -
Happiness I'll know at last:
My soul worships.
There are no grey skies - only clouds with silver linings
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Mon Jul 11, 2005 7:50 pm

I'm doing a lot of dancing around lately...

Teeth, teeth I say!

Good use of language though.

Cheers.
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