this evening whilst rummaging
through my head
I found three clothes pegs (one bright blue)
an abandoned granddad (at the end of a pier)
a frisky Goat (who smoked)
and the butt of a joke.
I tried to amalgamate
but failed
and thought I’d tell you about it.
On having nothing to write about
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Ah thanks Camus
now I shall spend my evening worrying
about the butting goat and the potential damage
to poor Old Gramps on the edge!
not to mention the other colors of the pegs!
missed your writing!
Jennifer
now I shall spend my evening worrying
about the butting goat and the potential damage
to poor Old Gramps on the edge!
not to mention the other colors of the pegs!
missed your writing!
Jennifer
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Ha Ha,
Welcome Jennifer you emule reject, lol.
Of course that was a terrible reflection. Great to see you here, I'm sure your poems (if you decide to post) will be fully appreciated. Your writing very much reminds me of an ex poster on Here That girl (TG), a younger version of yourself I thought, check out some of her poems.
Anyway, again great to have you aboard, for however long.
Welcome Jennifer you emule reject, lol.
Of course that was a terrible reflection. Great to see you here, I'm sure your poems (if you decide to post) will be fully appreciated. Your writing very much reminds me of an ex poster on Here That girl (TG), a younger version of yourself I thought, check out some of her poems.
Anyway, again great to have you aboard, for however long.
http://www.closetpoet.co.uk
Is that an offical forum term? An ex poster? I'm hurt Kris, really, I'll never forgive you.
Anyway, I feel if someone's writing is being compared to mine I should at least introduce myself: that girl, at your service.
I'm pleased to see you found the forum, Jen. Sadly I'm not a frequent poster. I will check back and read your stuff, however. An older version of me, you say....
sarah
Anyway, I feel if someone's writing is being compared to mine I should at least introduce myself: that girl, at your service.
I'm pleased to see you found the forum, Jen. Sadly I'm not a frequent poster. I will check back and read your stuff, however. An older version of me, you say....
sarah
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Hi Sarah! I would love to read your work as well. Thanks for introducing yourself.
sheesh I wonder how old Mr. Camus thinks I am.
and I wonder if you have my eyes.
hmm I think I will go post a poem
make myself at home
edit:
16! Whoa I am impressed! I really enjoyed the poems I read so far, did not comment yet, too busy reading and should be sleeping.
When I was 16 I wrote this horrid piece
the smoke blurs my eyes
but clears my head
I was once suicidal
Now just wish I were dead
damn I am really sorry for hijacking this thread. bad rep day 1.
sheesh I wonder how old Mr. Camus thinks I am.
and I wonder if you have my eyes.
hmm I think I will go post a poem
make myself at home
edit:
16! Whoa I am impressed! I really enjoyed the poems I read so far, did not comment yet, too busy reading and should be sleeping.
When I was 16 I wrote this horrid piece
the smoke blurs my eyes
but clears my head
I was once suicidal
Now just wish I were dead
damn I am really sorry for hijacking this thread. bad rep day 1.
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a cop out??camus wrote:Thanks guys,
Literally wrote down what was in my head at the time, what a cop out.
Sorry TG to refer to you in the past tense, welcome.
sheesh that is what I always do....
um
what am I supposed to be doing.....
this smilie has the DT's
Thanks for the greeting Kris, I am glad I followed the link at your site, this seems like a terrific community and I look forward to hangin' around.
~j
hi all,
i havent posted or commented on here for a while, ive been away and am now trying to read up on everyone..
really like this camus, both humourous and clever
ill post something new of my own soon hopefully
atb
rasp.
i havent posted or commented on here for a while, ive been away and am now trying to read up on everyone..
really like this camus, both humourous and clever
ill post something new of my own soon hopefully
atb
rasp.