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Honky Tonk Tanka
Posted: Wed Aug 24, 2005 7:34 pm
by Bombadil
Average saloon,
smoke soaked souls and whiskey
worn washups. Slews of
no-rhythm tattoos dancing
drunkenly to their boots’ beat.
Posted: Wed Aug 24, 2005 8:51 pm
by camus
cool.
It's Tanka Time.
Re: Honky Tonk Tanka
Posted: Thu Aug 25, 2005 10:46 am
by Kirkland
Bombadil wrote:Average saloon,
smoke soaked souls and whiskey
worn washups. Slews of
no-rhythm tattoos dancing
drunkenly to their boots’ beat.
I like it. I always love good use of alliteration! Very sexy stuff.
Posted: Fri Aug 26, 2005 11:37 pm
by Bombadil
shucks. thanks.
Posted: Sun Aug 28, 2005 11:01 am
by twelveoone
ROCKS
Flawlessly
Do like this best:
"Slews of
no-rhythm tattoos dancing
drunkenly to their boots’ beat."
Posted: Mon Aug 29, 2005 7:44 pm
by Bombadil
1201,
This is a rare occasion, when I like my own stuff. I agree with you. I like it which, again is extremely odd.
-K.