Poetry Forum

I know where I am,
in the forests of the cities
where concrete trees hang shadows
to hide the choking mist.

And I remember the future
with its war is hell and
cake is good.

Been down by the banks of
the Sylvan Wye, have I. I remember.

Seen it all.

Hi Till Death,

I liked this poem. Particularly liked the lines "where concrete trees hang shadows to hide the choking mist".

Very good.

Rach

Hello, I def agree with Rachael. but Im not sure about the two I s together "have I. I remember" but maybe you have a reason. But I quite enjoyed this, consice and to the point with great visuals. best wishes mj

Thanks. It took a whole 60 seconds to write, so I'm glad my hard work has been so well-received.