Don't Ever Mess With Me, Girl!

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Robert Davidson
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Location: Melbourne Australia

Mon Sep 19, 2005 9:39 am


DON'T EVER MESS WITH ME GIRL!

by Robert Davidson.

Don't wanna hit no all-time low
Don't wanna be no broken-hearted clown;
Never want no lowdown fickle woman
A-turnin' my life upside down.
So, if you ain't got nothin' to give, baby
No genuine heart to unfurl;
Then don't ever mess with me, girl
Don't ever mess with me.

Don't wanna no girl lead me on
Don't wanna lovin' leavin' me confused;
Never wanna feel I've been played upon
A-feelin' I've been badly used.
So you wanna make it good with me, baby
You wanna try give it a whirl;
Then don't ever mess with me, girl
Don't ever mess with me.

I've been badly torn apart once before.
Had me a liitle girl many years ago,
Who said she'd love me forever more.
Well, she stole my heart, then slept around
With every other guy in town.

Don't wanna be no lonely heart
Don't wanna have no nothin' come my way;
Never want no girl messin' with my life.
'Cause there's a price she'll have to pay.
So don't ever push my love aside. baby,
Or try a-giving it the hurl.
So, don't ever mess with me, girl
Don't ever mess with me.
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Wed Sep 21, 2005 12:54 pm

I could imagine Elvis singing this!
God told me to!
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