Hi Camus
I have to say I really like this poem. Its short and sweet, very descriptive and brings to light the truth that most like to hide from in these kind of situations. It was a very interesting topic to write so beautifully about; I enjoyed reading it.
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Worthy of the bump...misunderstandings aside. I enjoy the genteel nature in this one. You really must explore this type of poem further Kris, the voice becomes you.