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Posted: **Wed Dec 01, 2004 4:46 am**

Hi Camus
I have to say I really like this poem. Its short and sweet, very descriptive and brings to light the truth that most like to hide from in these kind of situations. It was a very interesting topic to write so beautifully about; I enjoyed reading it.

Posted: **Wed Dec 01, 2004 6:04 pm**

mba,

thank you for your kind comments, I'm glad you enjoyed.

Posted: **Tue Mar 15, 2005 6:40 pm**

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Posted: **Wed Mar 16, 2005 8:23 pm**

Worthy of the bump...misunderstandings aside. I enjoy the genteel nature in this one. You really must explore this type of poem further Kris, the voice becomes you.

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