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The clock strikes sometime in March
17th I think
I wont remember much
The sun went so far beneath the trees
Hide and seek
She smirked quietly
There was a girl in the woods
He, You.. Went in to look for her
What caught her I guess,
I'll never know
The girl came out a woman

Tick tock midsummer clock
I laugh through paxil
You could seduce the flowers to smell so pretty for you And you alone
I saw you laughing with her
Dont recall her name

Bees seemed to flock round you
Honey dripping off your tongue
But only you didn't seduce the bees
You charmed her instead
I could only watch
He never saw me

Summer sun turns cold
Oh, tick tock.
I didn't try
To stop
Please slow down
Watch the time flitter flutter fly
You stared right into her
Could speak softy, could you?
She didn't want you
She became you
Maybe she truely did want it

I wanted to keep those love letters
Poured over them for says on end
I bet
She wept
I wonder
Now whenever I look at her
My eyes stop
Everything stops
Lower your eyes girl
I wont let him charm me again

Dont,

Welcome.

Please refer to the rules at the top of the forum. No more than two poems a day, and kindly critique someone else's stuff prior to making a first post. Look forward to seeing your stuff around the forum.

Cheers,

Bombadil

Unless...we want to change that one rule. The one that chides me most.

Saw you posted comments. Forgive the haste.

Ta.

Bomb.